Thursday, March 8, 2012

Regina Alvarado Climax


Regina Alvarado
Assignment 8

                Claudia was violently shaken awake. She gasped as she realized that night had fallen and she had long since dozed off in her love, Marcus’s arms. Fear gripped her when she realized that it was Tullia who had shook her and that Tullia’s face was flooded with worry.
                “What are you doing?! You were supposed to be back hours ago? Your father has gathered his men in a search party for you! He said that he saw you two together in the Forum at the last festival day! Someone told him that Marcus is a fisherman plebe! He’s fuming!” All of these words spilled out of Tullia’s mouth and Claudia couldn’t breathe.
                Marcus said, “Well let’s go to him and simply explain what happened. We just fell asleep! We didn’t mean too! Surely he’ll understand!”
                “No!” Tullia screamed. “He said he’ll have your head for besmirching him and his family! He’s murderous! You have to run Marcus! Claudia get up let’s go, we have to get you back home! We’ll think of something to excuse you on the way, but please we must hurry!”
                Claudia finally caught her breath and with that she got her nerve. She wasn’t going to let her father harm the man she loved. All her furious emotions towards the class system that separated her life from Marcus’s fueled her and she was prepared to stand up to her father. There would be no more sneaking around.

With Marcus’s hand held firmly in hers she walked through the vestibule of her home to meet her father. And as if in slow motion, men pounced on Marcus and captured him, dragging him away! Claudia screamed and tried to claw her way to defend him. Fists rained down on him and his cries chilled her to her core. She ran to father to beg him to call off his men, she dropped to her knees and hugged his leg. He did nothing. Marcus was no longer fighting back or making noise and Claudia’s men dragged him off through the atrium.
                “FATHER WHY? Please, no, just let him go! It was my fault not his! Please Father I love him!” Claudia screamed at the top of her lungs.
                Her father reached down and grabbed her by her shoulders and with his strength picked her up and yelled for her to quiet down.
                “That boy is beneath you, beneath us! How dare you embarrass me like that! How dare HE insult me like that, insult my name? And defile my daughter? No!” Claudia’s father screamed back her.
                Claudia couldn’t hear Marcus or her fathers’ men anymore. Her father wasn’t listening to her. Panic struck her and she sunk down to the ground overwhelmed. She lost her love, she didn’t know if she’d ever see him again. He was probably gone for good. This sad realization overcame her and sank in as the screams she had been emitting finally began to subside and she was overtaken by her cries. Her body was convulsing with tears and her father, with an averse face,  slowly walked away from his daughter who was crumpled on the floor to go finish the job.