Friday, February 3, 2012

Assignemnt 4: Character Descriptions


       Lucius dropped his sword in exhaustion.  Battle practices with his master’s son were beginning to take their toll on his already fatigued body.  His muscles ached, but in a way that proved he was getting stronger.  His brown hair, lightened by all the time spent under the sun, was damp with sweat; his bangs stuck to his forehead.  He wiped the sweat from his brow with the backs of his callused, overworked hands and began to return the practice equipment to its proper place.  The soles of his calcei were wearing thin, making them much more uncomfortable than they already were.  Soon he would be able to feel the roughness of the gravel beneath him against the flesh of his heels.  His plain, tattered tunic was also wet from perspiration; he was all but thrilled at the thought of remaining in his soiled clothes for the remainder of the day.  Lucius made his way back to the house to tend to the rest of his lingering chores.  Walking inside, he caught a glimpse of his own reflection, and what he saw mirrored back to him was the sight of a champion.  Standing at five foot nine, his quick movements with a sword and the ferocity in his gaze could be intimidating to any enemy.  He was a hero in the making.
        Footsteps were coming from the stairs above him.  It was Julia, the master’s daughter.  Julia had a particular elegance about her.  She moved with certain lightness with each step she took, so that it almost looked as though she was floating.  Her linen peplos nearly touched her feet, revealing her sloeae she often wore around the house.  Today her hair was down, and the loose brown curls covered her delicate shoulders.  When she reached the bottom of the stairs she stopped and glanced at Lucius, always happy to see him, before smiling and continuing on. Julia was the one person who was able to look past his demeaning social status; she saw him as a human being, not a slave, and he appreciated her for this.  Though they had a special friendship, Lucius was hesitant in telling her of his dreams to join the army.  He was afraid she would not understand his desire to be a part of it. He kept these thoughts to himself.

-Elizabeth Reed